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I can feel your body holding me
Expressing emotions I didn't see.
Deep in your eyes is a flair.
A kiss would be a real dare.

The heavy hug finally ends
And a conversation begins.
Next to you, there's ease,
No one better to set me free.

Warm would be to taste your lips.
To express a love with one swift kiss.
Even though it would be great,
I change thought and just wait.

With each word that we speak;
There's a time in which I seek.
The time that will let you accept
All these feelings for you I've kept.

The time is right, I feel the heat.
Now is right for our lips to meet.
We lean forward, I close my eyes.
The tension builds and on a rise.

Gentle lips begin to wind;
Heaven's touch, so divine.
©2007-2009 ~heybrady
:iconheybrady:

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Sorry about how lame my poem is. Took some time writing it.

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:iconkira-yagami:
now this is going into my favorites for sure hehe:) this poem is so expressive and motivating, the romance and the love in it is true and swift in my own words hehe, excellent work, you have out done yourself brad :w00t:

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Will you hold me till mornings light?

and I will tell you........

What it's like to DIE!!
:iconautumn-cannibal:
You've outdone yourself, my friend :) You've shown a deep understanding of romantic impressions, which compliments the rich langauge

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Cruciatus Animus, Pius Vates
:iconmechanicaltea:
I can tell you know how this feels. Props.

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Take off your monocle
Hand it to me
I saw the lightning flash over the sea
:iconheybrady:
Thank you very much.
:iconheybrady:
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it :)
:iconimaginary-wings:
the feeling in this is so strong... i love it. =D
if you wrote this meaning it... i know how u feel :XD:
:heart::+fav:

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Be who you are and say what you feel because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind.
- Dr. Seuss
:iconheybrady:
Thanks for the comment. :)

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